the film has been dropped

So although we tried to rectify the gaps in out narrative, i think we just made them worse. We simplified the story to an extent where it just wasnt readable any more. I think half of the problem was that we were trying to create a story for our cheracters, instead of characters to fit a story. Either way, we have taken a risky move and have dropped our current story in search of a new one. We have a group meeting soon to disscuss possible new ventures